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I just wanted to thank you for your insite on the first chapter of my book. I'm looking at ways to describe the dark man without giving away his identity now, but you're absolutely right about needing more of a mental image. Thanks so much!

Hi Cheryl.

Thank you for your commments. I guess I was so busy trying to capture memories from so many years ago that I did not pay sufficient attention to paragraph structure.
I have struggled with dialog mostly because my memory of specifc conversations is limited. I could, I suppose, just make up conversations that relate to the experience as a whole. I hate to do that as I would like the writing to be as truthful as possible.
Any suggestions on how to approach this dilema?
Thanks again.

Roger

Thank Cheryl. How is your work coming along these days?



I love self publishing - Its work but I am really enjoying the process and feel good when I get one step closer.

Thanks Cheryl for the encouragement, it is always needed. I may be contacting you in regards to self publishing, the entire thing is terrifying. But I am not in it to make money, just to do what I love.

Thanks Cheryl, Its a whole new ballgame now.



Take Care,

Jason

Thanks Cheryl for the comments and if you come across the isbn no. info I am all ears. I have started researching starting my own "publishing" company for a few of my projects and may be a few others. It seems like a really fun learning experience and challenging. I have also spent around the 1000, 1500 mark as well and it was not all at once so It didn't hurt as bad.



If I come across any great information I will send it your way.



Thanks,

Jason

You're exactly right about the car crunching through the snow. Words were spilling out rather quickly, so that seemed good enough at the time. Thanks.

Very nice looking cover. It always feels so good to see something like that. I wish you the best of luck.