I just finished my last go-through of the MS when I stumbled upon the answer in the crammed spaces of my brain: I was writing about mangy pines, not mangy pins. You see, ". . . dirt fields and mangy pines raced by. . .".
The main character is tearing through Russia, desperately searching for a way out of his dilemma, and, well . . . it's a long story. I don't want to jinx him. His name is Justin, by the way.
I was just one letter off, and I had no idea. Time to hang it up for tonight!



Mikey, do you mean the "last go-through" as in it's ready to send to an agent? If so, congratulations.
I.R. Griffith05:50 AM CST